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Have you ever played that game where one person starts a story, then another person adds a sentence, and another person adds a sentence, and it goes on and on and on? The BSG and I LOVE to play that at Tower sleepovers, and the stories always turn out really crazy and funny! Wanna play? I’ll start the story: “One Saturday, the BSG were sitting in Montoya’s bakery like usual, drinking huge red mugs of hot chocolate with tons of whipped cream on top. Suddenly, the door opened, and they were totally shocked to see a space alien walk in! Maeve was so surprised she spit her mouthful of hot chocolate all over Katani. But Avery stood up and… horseluvr84: .... said well, I don't believe that much that THIS is an alien. i think the yurtmeister is up to it again, or IS he?...... wizkid52: ..."I know, it looks so real," Isabel said."Well, maybe we should invite it to school." The rest of the BSG could see where she was going with it. "You're right. our science teacher would LOVE to run some tests." The alien sqeaked. eee!And in a very robotic, and sloppy way, it said, "I-don't, um, enjoy,yes, uh, tests. I-usually, well, um FAIL! Yes, that's it. I fail-the-important-tests." Charlotte stood up. "Well, too bad. This could be the article of the century and I'm not going to miss out on it." She and Avery took the alien by each arm and dragged it down Harvard Street, all the way to Abigail Adams, despite obvious struggles... BSGLover123: ...but when they got to AAJH Mrs.Field says "What in the world is that?!" Avery said "It's an alien from outer space and we just wanted to see if one of the science teacher's can do some tests on him." when Avery said this the alien was struggling to get out. Avery and Charlotte tryed to hold on tight but he got free. and... BSG girl111: ...they chased after him. after running into the library they saw him go into the science store. "Trapped!" said Maeve. "Listen all i wan tis to find my family." said the alien. "what do you mean?" avery said. " well when we got on board to our plane for our yearly earth trip to get some sun i knew something bad would happen. but not this bad. and when our plane crash landed... sidnee#8: ... I was so post to go and get help from something but that is when I smelled something really good comming from that bakery and though mom and dad would not mind if I got some food I am really hungry and I can't find someone or something if I am hungry (because then I am cranky and you don't want me getting cranky!)So anyway I am so post to be getting... teddybear916: ...a pizza." "A pizza?" asked Charlotte incredulously. "Yes" said the alien. "My alien family loves pizza with anchovies." "Anchovies, ewww!" Maeve shrieked. "We like it," the alien told Maeve... qvhlover: ...but Maeve still wrinkled her nose in disgust. "Well," Avery piped up, "lets take it to get some pizza!" Slowly the rest of the BSG led the alien to the pizza parlor around the corner, Marty nipping at the alien's feet all the way. That's when Katani looked up in shock and saw... sassygirl900: ..."Maeve it's probably just your dad and you came up with the whole scheme since you looove acting." No guys I swear I didnt do this",said Maeve. " Oh sure , yah right see ill prove it." Avery got up to pull of the mask but it wouldn't budge, not one inch.The BSG grabbed thier mugs and ran for it not looking back they all went safetly to the tower where they recapped what had happened. The next day the BSg were walking and saw a poster that said " Alien Spaceship Movie" (filming on Beacon Street ). Isabel exclaimed " That wasn't an alien from outer space , it was just a hungry actor!"
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LOL...that turned out sooooo funny! Let's do another one! Only this time, YOU get to pick what happens next. Use the little pink hearts under each comment box to vote for your favorite. I'll post the sentence with the most hearts. When you see a new sentence, write what you think the NEXT sentence should be. That way we can keep going!OK, here's how it starts... Isabel had just walked out of math class when Maeve came running up to her in the hallway. "Omigosh Isabel! I have to tell you something right now!" "Calm down, Maeve. What is it?" Isabel asked. Maeve glanced around nervously to make sure nobody was listening, then she leaned in and whispered... sidnee#8: ..."Dillon asked me out on a real date!!!! And that is not even the best part!! Guess what he also said... izzybee: ...he also said that he found out that Nick Montoya is going to ask out Charlotte,too!!" Isabel replied... actressangie: ...Isabel gasped. "Oh my god I!!...oh." Isabel suddenly lost all excitment. "What is it? What's wrong?" asked Maeve. "I thought...I thought Nick might have actually liked me. No one has ever liked me before." A tear leaked out of Isabel's eye and she quickly wiped it away. "I've got to go." her voice quavered as she spoke to Maeve. Her eyes brimming with tears she... teddybear916: ...fled from the room before anyone could see the great globs of wet tears flooding down her cheeks. "Isabel? Isabel?!" Maeve called. But Isabel just kept going without looking back. Then Charlotte approached. "What's with Isabel?" she asked softly. Maeve gulped. How was she going to put this to Charlotte? "Um, Char," Maeve began... advice girl!: ..."Well Dillon asked me out on a real date." Charlotte said "Oh that is great Maeve, but why is Isabel crying?" Maeve said "Because Dillon told me that Nick Montana was going to ask you out too! But when I told Isabel she thought that Nick liked her! Then I was going to tell her that I also herd that Kevin was going to ask her out too, but she ran away!" "Omigosh Nick is really going to ask me out?" Charlotte said "Yep" said Maeve! "That is great, but lets go fine Isabel and tell her that Kevin is going to ask her out... I bet if we tell her that she will feel way better! Or at least I hope so!" Charlotte said. Just then Nick came up and said... dramaqueen333: ..."Um, Maeve, is it okay if I talk to Char in private? I have a really important question to ask her." Nick said hesitently. "Oh! Sure Nick, I'm gone! I'll go find Isabel! Bye Char!" Maeve replied exitedly. Nick cleared his throat. "OK, Char, I was wondering if...." sidnee#8: ... "Well... if you would like to hang out at the bakery this Friday? No wait not the bakery I mean the movies... NO I mean meet me at the bakery and then go to the movies?" Charlotte Laughed and then said "you are starting to sound like me Nick!" Nick laughed and then said "so what do you think?" Charlotte said "well I will have to ask my dad first, but I would totally love to! I will call you tonight okay?" "Sure" said Nick "I will be waiting for you" then he turned around to leave and a piece of paper fell out of his pocket. Charlotte picked it up and said "oh Nick you dropped this!" He came back to get it when Charlotte was reading it and Charlotte said "wow Nick did you write this?" He said "oh ya I know it is really bad.." Charlotte cut him off and said "no it is really good! I did not know you wrote poems!" Well it is not something I tell everyone... I got to go call me later okay!" "Ya" said Charlotte.... So she went home and said hay dad Nick Montana asked me out oh Friday and I was wondering if I could go? He said..... superstar12: ... "Is this the montoya boy?" he asked, sipping from his cup of coffe. "Uh, yeah" charlotte said, shyly. "You can go, aslong as you bring me back a cinamon bun, I love them!' he said as he sipped more of his coffe. "Yes!" charlotte said to herself, as she dialed Nick's number. "Hello? Nick?" she asked, fidgeting with her glasses. "Charlotte?" "yeah, my dad said I could go" "Cool, how about tonight? at the bakery?" he asked. Charlotte could just imagine him grinning on the other end of the phone. "see ya soon' charlotte smiled. "Ya bye" he hung up "Yes!" charlotte said, as she flung open her closet door and pulled out her new purple tee, jeans and ballet flats. An hour later Charlotte was outside the Bakery, she stepped inside only to see... amatomboy29: ... Nick standing there holding gigantic box wrapped in purple paper, Charlotte's favorite color. "Here. This is for you.", Nick muttered, blushing madly, as she handed her the present. "Oh, Nick. You really didn't have to do this. What... there's air holes on this!" she said, bewildered as she lifted the lid and saw Orangina, the cat she lost in Paris, staring up at her. "How did you... what... ORANGINA!!!! How did you do this?!". "Well, I talked to Maeve to find out the perfect gift for you. She said they'd been planning this for a long time. So... she emailed Sophie and she found Orangina and sent her to me. I wrapped him up and here we are." "Oh, Nick..." That's when he kissed her. She couldn't believe it, but she loved it. And for ten whole seconds that how it was. "Oh, Nick..."
THE END
Oh my gosh! I'm totally blushing! You guys are soooo creative. I'm not sure if I'm ready to go on a real live date with Nick, but if I do, I hope it turns out like that!OK, for the next story you need to know a little bit about the completely awesome and exciting stuff that happened to Avery when she visited her dad in Colorado...including meeting her new (cute AND cool) friend Jason! You can read all about it and see what other girls are saying on the Freestyle with Avery page! Here's the story... "We're back from the airport!" Avery's mom called up the stairs. Avery could feel her heart pounding. She hadn't seen Jason since she left Colorado. Would he still want to be friends? Would things be awkward? She ran down the stairs and bounced into the living room. Jason looked up from his suitcase and said... amatomboy29: ...with a great big smile, "What's up? Did ya miss me?". "Was I supposed to?" she replied, laughing. They acted as though they had known each other forever, and Avery had never gone back to Boston. "Well", her mom said, looking fondly at Jason, "Jason's family that he had been living with had to move to Europe. So they asked Dad if he could stay with him. He said Jason would probably like it better here. He's gonna go to your school, and live in that guest room!". "OH MY GOSH! This is so incredible. So now I have 3 brothers. This is, like, so COOL!!! Wait, I gotta go IM the BSG and tell them this!". When she logged on, started a chat room. When all the BSG heard, they came rushing over. When Maeve saw Jason, she gushed... bsgmea13: ..."Wow, Avery..." Avery recognized the tone. Maeve was in love- with Jason. Who knew? "Someone's crushing," whispered Katani. The entire BSG knew how Maeve could get when she was in deep love. "Is he taken?" asked Maeve, in a lovey-dovey sort of way. "Not that I know of," said Charlotte. Avery shot her a look. She still couldn't gather her thoughts together about how she felt about Jason. She liked him, but was it as a friend...or for real?... catlover111: ...Avery looked over at Jason, who was deep in conversation with Maeve. He looked like he was enjoying himself, and Maeve was flirting like crazy. Maeve was giggling and playing with her hair and Jason was laughing at her jokes. Avery just went and sat on the couch by herself. After a while Avery's friends all left- except for Maeve. Jason came and sat down next to Avery. He said" Wow, your friends are great!! And get this, I'm going to the movies with Maeve tomorrow night!". Maeve came over and added " I hope you don't mind since, you know, Jason's here visiting you". Tears filled Avery's eyes and she said... unicorngirl: ..."oh, I dont mind. I'm going to go and help with lunch, by!" Avery ran into the kitchen, and broke done into tears. Maeve entered the kitchen. When she saw Avery, a worried expression filled her face. Avery saw her, and hastily grabbed an onion and a knife, to make it seem like she was crying because of the onion. But it was too late, Maeve had seen her, and Jason was right behind her. "Avery," Jason began... happyluckythingylover: ...Avery pivoted around on her heel and tried to wipe her eyes. But Jason already noticed she was upset, and frowned. "Um Maeve, can we have a second?" Jason asked. Maeve nodded and stepped out. Jason shot her a grateful smile. "Ave, I'm so sorry. I really am! I mean, Maeve is just...." Jason paused awkwardly, looking for the right word. "Prettier than me. I get it, Jase. She's practically a... whatchamacallit, Covergirl? I get it." Avery finished for him. Jason just sat on the ground and blushed deep red. He looked up at Avery. "No, Avery! You don't get it! I never wanted to go out with Maeve! I said yes because she's really nice, and I don't want to hurt her feelings! I wanted to go out with you, Ave, not Maeve!" Jason finished his outburst and hid his head in his hands. He started either laughing or crying, Avery couldn't tell. Avery gently tapped him on the back. "Jason? You, um, alright?" Jason stood up. "Yeah. I'm alright. I just don't get how it's possible to make such a fool of myself!" Avery giggled and smiled. She was gonna do it! Or was she? Was Avery nervous? Finally making up her mind, Avery stood on tiptoe and gave Jason a little, teeny weeny peck on the cheek. Both of the blushed. Suddenly, Maeve walked in. "Oh... amatomboy29: ..."Hey are you guys mad at me wuzzup?" "No... no, not mad really, it's just..." Avery stared at her shoes. "Just what? Trust me I was not listening to you guys. I heard that American Idol on t.v. Hurry up! I'm gonna miss the next song!!!" Maeve was desperate. "Okay, here's the deal. Are you sure you want to know?" Jason asked. Maeve nodded and her red curls bounced. "Look, you're really sweet and all, but I mean, we just met. We should take it slow. In the mean time, would it be okay if I go out with Avery?" Jason sounded like he had practiced that. "Well, sure, that's understandable." Maeve smiled, but there was a tiny tear on her cheek. She quickly brushed it away. "Thanks so much, Maeve.", Avery hugged her friend, something she never did. "Yeah, you're sweet!" Jason gave her a small, quick kiss on the cheek. Then he gave Avery a REAL kiss. Her first one ever. Her face glowed. But Maeve looked mad. "While, you guys stand here kissing, there are starving children somewhere!" she stomped out of the kitchen and slammed the door; apperently she was angry. "What happened? I thought she was okay with it." Jason looked concerned. "Well I'm not. Hey, Avery, why aren't you with your BOYFRIEND?" Maeve wrote later that night after Avery had logged on "chat room bsg. "Cuz I wanna b with my buds" Avery typed. When maeve had thought this over, she typed... teddybear916: ... "yeah, well, do u mean katani, charlotte, and isabel? b/c im sure u don't mean me. jason-stealer!" Avery read Maeve's message, shocked. "but u have dillon. he likes u." Avery's bluntness came in handy in this case. "oh puh-leeze," Maeve typed. Avery could just imagine Maeve saying this to her, her voice dripping sarcasm. "c'mon girls, please," Isabel cut in. "let it be, izzy. obviously avery doesnt care about the starving children she could have saved while kissing jason!" Katani, confused, replied, "will someone explain this to me? starving children? porquoi?" Maeve's angry rampage unleashed on poor unsuspecting Katani. "just butt out!" With that, Maeve logged off the chatroom. "hey ave, what's her deal?" Charlotte asked. Avery looked at the message, prepared to tell the whole twisted love triangle, and began to answer. "well, i got my first kiss. but maeve is caught up in it all. it started when..." skywriter: ...Later that night, Maeve called Avery. "What?" Avery said, answering her phone angrily. "I just wanted to apologize," Maeve explained. "You're totally right. I guess I just freaked out when Jason said he didn't like me. Can we still be BFFs?" "Of course, no prob!" Avery answered. "I stick with my BSGs over any boy, any day. Period. BSG for life!"
THE END
I hope you liked the way I ended that one! All your ideas were really interesting and dramatic--but I gotta say, I hope nothing like that ever actually happens to the BSG! Time for a new story now! Yay! Here's how it starts... Katani burst into homeroom, out of breath. "Girls! Listen up! You are never going to believe what I just overhead Grandma Ruby saying in the hallway! She said...she said that they might be closing Abigail Adams Junior High!" All the BSG gasped. "Oh nooooo!" Maeve wailed. "Wait, I have an idea," Charlotte said. "I know we can save the school. All we have to do is... happyluckythingylover: Convince everyone otherwise." Charlotte suggested. "But how? It may be pretty hard to," thought Isabel out loud. "I HAVE AN IDEA!" Avery burst out. Everyone giggled at how loudly and randomly she said that. "We should make a poster about how important Abigail Adams Junior High is!" Avery continued. "And have everyone sign it!" Maeve suggested. Everyone nodded approvingly. Charlotte fiddled with her funky purple glasses like she did when she was thinking. "That's a great idea, Ave! What if we had a group of people, including us, meet every so often to organize it all?" Charlotte implied. "Oh! And we can have a sign up sheet for the group!" Isabel added. "I like the way u guys think! We can meet at Montoya's today..." Katani said, her eyes twinkling. This plan had to work. AAJH WOULD stay in business. It would just take a little work, and a whole lot of determination. That afternoon at Montoya's, Avery piped right up. She said... pandalover613: "OMG! I have a great idea!" "Calm down Ave." Charlotte giggled. Avery was bouncing up and down in her seat with excitement. "I can't! I have this great idea! So, listen to this. We can raise a ton of money to help save AAJH. We can do an auction thing. Everyone in school can bring 2 items to put in the auction. Then we use the gym to do the auction in. Isabel can draw posters for the auction and draw pictures to auction off, and Katani might even design some clothing and Charlotte can write books. Maeve can even video tape herself doing a movie and sell that!" Avery exclaimed. "That's a great idea!" Maeve said, her eyes sparkling. "Finally I will be famous!" "This isn't about getting famous, Maeve. It's about saving Abigal Adams Junior High." Isabel said. "I know, I know." Maeve said, calming down. The next day, the BSG presented their idea to their homeroom class. Everyone loved the idea. Everyone except for 2 people in particular. Anna and Joline. As soon as the class quieted down, Anna said... leaofparis: "Who cares? If we let this old dump close, we can go to J** School on the other end!" "Why would you want to go to stupid J** School?" Avery butted in. "'Cause J** School is soo much cooler. They have three swimming pools and dances every week!" "I'm in!" piped up a voice. The BSG turned to see who it was. "Great, Dillon," said Anna. Then she walked over and planted her lips on Dillon, who said... happyluckythingylover: "Um..." Dillon managed to say. This next move surprised EVERYONE. With Anna still standing near his desk with a hopeful look on her face, he stood up and kissed her right back. Maeve turned the color of her hair and hid her face in her arms. "I'm out of this whole idea! Totally OUT! And Dillon, you are NOT who I thought you are!" fumed Maeve. She stomped out of the classroom and to the restroom, her red hair flying behind her. Isabel jumped up and followed her to the bathroom, and muffled sobs waited into the classroom. "You know what Dillon? You just broke Maeve's heart. This is a disaster!" Charlotte surprisingly added. "But... I just wanted to... Dillon began... denimgirl07: "I just wanted to break Maeve's heart. MUAH HA HA!!!!!!" he said in a strange, robotic voice. And then Dillon's eyes turned green and his hands turned into to pinchers! "CRAB BOY!!!" he screamed, and he chased Charlotte down the hall, try to pinch her! "Aaaaah!" screamed Charlotte as she ran. Then, all of the other students in the room except for the BSG, and including the teacher, turned into evil crab robots. "This is why the school is closing!!! SO IT CAN BE A CRAB-ROBOT SCHOOL!" screamed the crab-teacher in a robot voice. The BSG ran and ran out of the school before the evil crab robots could get them. Huffing and puffing, Katani said, "OMG! We left Maeve and Isabel in the bathroom..." mome123: "We have to go save them!" said Katani. She, Charlotte, and Avery dodged the mutant crab-boy robot army and headed for the bathroom. They couldn't see anything when they walked in, only green nausiating smoke. The girls started to cough. "Mae-cough-ve! Isa-cough-bel!" Avery managed. "Mua-ha-ha!" A scary robotic voice said. "Oh-no! The only thing left of them is there shoes!" Charlotte cried. Maeve's ballet flats, and Isabel's high-tops lay on the floor covered in green slime... cookygirl202: ... and then Katani woke up. She was sweating and her heart was beating WAY fast. Oh thank god! It was just a dream... TOO FREAKY FOR WORDS! she thought. But it was only Saturday morning. But part of it was true; her grandma had told her that the school might have to close because they didn't have enough teachers and nobody would apply for a job. She was hoping that it didn't have to. AAJH ROCKED! She logged on her mac laptop and found the BSG online. flickchic- hey gril flickchic- oops girl! 4kicks- yo! lafrida- hey! skywriter- hi kgirl- I HAD THE WEIRDEST DREAM!! 4kicks- me 2! flickchic- it reminded me of a movie lafrida- mine was just plain creepy skywriter- SCARY!!! like something you would read in a book! kgirl- we were at school and it was about to close down, and dillon kissed anna and every one turned into mutant crabs! 4kicks- DID U COME TO MY DREAM CUZ I HAD THE SAME ONE! skywriter- mine too! lafrida- me three flickchic- i know what your talking about-- I CANNOT BELIEVE DILLON! kgirl- this is SERIOUS maeve. THE SCHOOL IS CLOSING DOWN FOR REAL! flickchic- in that case let's get working! lafrida- meet u at montoya's in 10! Kgirl turned of the computer and ran out the door and headed to Montoya's. When she got there... bria6785: "SURPRISE!" Grandma Ruby, The BSG, and all her other friends shouted as she opened the door. "Hun," Mrs. Fields began. "The school isn't closing. That was just an excuse to get you here. You work so hard all the time...and you forgot it was your birthday!" Katani's eyes brimmed with tears. "You guys are the best!" She whispered, and she meant it.
THE END
I loved that story! It took a lot of crazy twists and turns, but I think that just made it even better! I can't wait to see what you guys do with this one...
When Maeve opened her locker on Thursday morning, something fluttered to the ground. She bent over to pick it up. It was a square of notebook paper folded over and over again into a tiny rectangle. As she unfolded the mysterious note, she wondered who had slipped it into her locker. For once she was the first BSG at school that day. Inside, in scrawled handwriting, the note read: "You have been selected for a special assignment. Meet in Room 203 at 7:25 am for more instructions." Maeve looked at her pink-heart-covered watch. It was already 7:23! She whirled around and ran smack into... pandalover613: ...Avery. "Hi Maeve! What's up?" Avery asked. "Can't talk now,Ave. I got to go to room 203." Maeve said. "Bye." "Wait, Maeve!" Avery called after her but Maeve was gone. Maeve ran around the buiding, searching for room 203. She walked around and around, but she couldn't find room 203. Then she heard footsteps behind her. It was Avery. "Maeve. There is no room 203!" Avery said. "Then how am I supposed to get there?" Maeve asked. Suddenly, the girls saw a room they had never noticed before. Room 203. "Ave, this is creepy." Maeve said. "Don't be scared. I'll come with you." Avery said. The two girls entered room 203. Then, a light shone down on a table. The girls crept towards the table and saw that on the table, there was a... dramaqueen333: ...another paper. It was pink. It had a sparkly border. It read: SPECIAL ASSIGNMENT Go to Yuris and buy the greenest apple there. Eat it. These instructions are important and it is vital that you do this. "OK, that's just plain weird." Avery declared. "You can totally say that again." Maeve replied. "But I have to do it." She ran off with Avery at her heels. When she got to Yuris, she did just as the instructions said. She bought the greenest apple, and ate it. When she got to the core, there was a tiny peice of paper. It was another assignment. It read... skywriter101: ...Good Job in completing your assignment. Your next assignment is to go to Montoya's Bakery and buy an iced hot chocolate from Nick Montoya. And ONLY Nick Montoya. Maeve looked at Avery. They both dashed out of Yuri's and went across the street to Montoya's. It had the best pastries in the world. Maeve let out a sigh of releif when she saw Nick behind the counter, putting a fresh batch of those yummy fried cookies on the counter. "Hi, Nick." Maeve said, smiling at Nick. He smiled back. "Can we get an iced hot chocolate?" Avery asked. "Sure." He fixed one up and gave it to them. Maeve thanked him and looked at the piece of paper taped to the mug. She unfolded it and it read... Now it’s your turn! Write a comment with the next sentence and vote for the sentences you heart the most!
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What happens next? Remember, leave the story hanging at the end of your sentence, so we can keep going! And don't forget to heart your faves!
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You are smart. Too smart. I am sorry but this has all been a joke and I urge you to stop right now. "What"said Avery."We went through all of this for nothing?" "No, I know what this is. They want us to prove ourselves. There has got to be something else on this note." There was indeed. On the back it read... |
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Please heart my part! I want to get up high, and if I don't- sigh, sigh, sigh. I'm not wining, but I would have a petition if i was sure everyone would be signing! SO HEART AWAY TODAY! TCS! OBTW- Like my poetic-ness? blugh- wrong word- my poem thingy magiger? |
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softballchick- if you do all the initials of your username, it turns out to be sbc- like, sbcglobal (emails)- get it? i know I am random. And if you like long comments great! Kids rock! Well, obviously, since I kinda am one. Personally, i think being a teacher would rock, but I would MUCH rather be a pro swimmer or an actress! TCS! p.s. I come on here every day, so I'll be here! |
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bria, I haven't are they good? I voted 4 yours! LUV IT!!! |
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TCS, i dont mind! i ♥ to read long comments! thats so cool that ur mom is a teacher! i want to be a teacher when im older cause i ♥ to work with kids!  write back! |
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... Go to the movie house and look in the popcorn machine Find A small box. Avery and Maeve both said bye to nick and dashed off to the movie house."Girls whats the rush Your gonna be late to school."Maeve's father told the girls."Dad we gotta look in the popcorn machine,sorry."Maeve replied back to her dad.Avery was already looking in the popcorn machine, when Maeve got over there."Found it!" Maeve yelled excitedly. It said.. |
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| the paper silently. She read the message and gasped as dramatically as possible. She then it at least ten more times before Avery ripped it out of her hand. "Let me see!" she yelled. They both held on the opposite ends of the note, and tugged on it until it ripped and went flying in the air. A few seconds later, one half of it landed in Meave's iced hot chocolate and the other half in Avery's. "Look what you did!" They screamed in unison. A huge argument errupted when Charlotte walked into the bakery... | |
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| ...Go to the movie theaters and get a large coke."Thanks nick But we got to dash." Maeve said running out to catch up with Avery.When they got there Maeve asked for a large coke.They didn't see a pink sparkly note on the outside.They asumed they had to drink all of it, but when they finished 15 minutes later they noticed the note was on the bottom of the bottle.Maeve and Avery Groaned feeling stuiped.They looked at the note and it sayed.. | |
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| are you going to the party today if you are see you there and the note ended she was not going to the party beacase..... | |
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| Oh yeah- s-b_chick- *she goes on and on and on...* SORRY! Today, my mom was taking a seven hour test to get her Masters Degree in teaching, so my grandma came over to bring me and my brother lunch. So we t.p.-d our garage so when my mom came home she couldn't get in and we can't even walk in it now! And she made up a sign that says, "Congardulatons to a slo lirner frum som bad spelers! U finaly passed! Wee | |
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sbchick- Cool! I cannot do anything in softball/baseball! I'm not very hand-eye coordinated! Like lliterally I used a t once in baseball and I hit the t (it was rubber) and it bouced back making the ball hit me in the stomach making me trip over the base making me fall flat on top of all of it- AND my whole class PLUS all the 2nd and 3rd graders at my school were watching! LOL! I'm in swimming right now- my first meet is on July 5th (not very good timing!)! Sorry I type so much when I reply! I guess I could just say, "Cool! I stink at softball! I'm in swimming!". Oops that made it longer! TCS! |
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softballchick20
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TCS, ya im doing softball  i ♥ it! i am doing pretty good with hitting and pretty good with pitching. so r u in any sports???? write back soon! ◘softballchick20◘ |
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michellerocksout
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Great job on this one. You have really proved that you have got what it takes to be a star. Oh, and speaking of stars, you have been chosen to star in the next upcoming "American Idol for kids". If you wish to continue, go to the "Movie House" and pick up your next assignment. "The Movie House?"said Avery. "That's what it says"said Maeve. Once again Avery was dragged at her heels. "Why did I agree to join?"thought Avery. When the girls got there, they saw what they couldnt beleive. The person who was causing them so much trouble was dropping off the note right then and there. When he saw the girls, he ran.When the girls got up to the counter, there was another note there,this time with a sparkly blue border. When they picked it up it read... Hope you like it!!! |
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bria6785
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Please vote for my comment on June 24th! I really, really, REALLY want it posted. I mean, I know I already have one...but still, if you like it, heart it! Yours, bria6785 |
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abz
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softballchick20 We have not talked in like forever!How r u?My bro just graduated, i just came back from the ceremony! --abz |
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swimdude44
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sbchick- its like 110° where I live! NK! it was like 114° once! NKA! R U doing sb? ••• ••• ///TCS\ ••• ••• |
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crazymonkey
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| Go back to the school and go into classroom number 114. Maeve and Avery looked quizically and the note.Then Katani walked in they both ran over to her and asked her if she knew anything about this. "No. But i thought i saw something in that color over in the school just a minute ago." Katani answered hoping she was giving them help."Thanks gotta run." Maeve answered already out the door with Avery tring to catch up.When they got to classroom number 114 they looked in the window to make sure no one was in there. Avery gasped! Maeve grabbed Avery's hand and they trimbled. They both saw a very scary shadow, that was moving closer and closer to the door every second. Avery and Maeve screamed as the door opened only to dicover it was... | |
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softballchick20
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cookygirl202, thanx! im doing pretty good, except sometimes its boring because theres nuthin to do except play outside and its usually hot out and boring. lol- i sound happy! jk lol. but its pretty nice out and id rather have it hot than cold.  so, yeah, my summer's pretty hot! wats new with u? •softballchick20• |
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rosierules
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Great job again! Now you must follow these instructions: 1. Go to room 321 2. Turn on the light and on the table there will be something for you. So Maeve quickly drank her iced hot chocolate, and said "Ave I gotta run." "but..." Avery began, but before she could finish Maeve was out of Montoya's and jogging down beacon street to AAJH. Finally after she rushed out of Montoya's, she was back to AAJH in room 321. The note was right, as she turned oh the light there was a letter that said "look straight ahed" she looked and there standing in the light was Dillon, Maeve got so scared she yelped "wow! Dillon... What..... How...." suddenly Dillon cut her off and said "I can explain..." in a matter of seconds he was right by Maeve and just kissed her on the lips, then Avery walked in, Dillon quickly let go of Maeve and said blushing "Ave...." "Omigosh, Maeve....Dillon....What is going on?" Avery inturpted while she pulled Maeve to the corner "Um..." she began as she quickly explained what had happened after she ran out of Montoya's, Maeve wanted to get back to Dillon and talk to him about being BF/GF so she rushed through the explanation and finally Avery said " Oh, well I guess...You should go back and talk to him, he looks lonely!" Avery nudged Maeve. Maeve walked over to Dillon and said "I want to be your girlfriend we should meet at J.P. Licks tomorrow at 6:30" and then Dillon said "Yeah, that'd be GREAT!" then Avery had to make one of her jokes and said...... |
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saddlegaltex
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"Maeve,Please give this to Charlotte."Nick said -Charlotte, I was just wondering if we could go out again.Maybe longer,you know.We can meet here at Montoya's,when it's late. Love, Nick "OMG,I can't believe Nick asked Char out again!"Maeve said to Avery. Avery gave it to Charlotte.Charlotte was so happy. Katani chose her outfit and she looked glamourous! *** Nick looked at Charlotte."I am so glad we're going out"He said. "Yea me too."Charlotte smiled. Nick swooped her up and brought her close. "Char..."He said She said nothing.Then Nick and her held close and kissed  ... |
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bria6785
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mome123: Glad you liked my continuation! I hope that other people do, too. I DO read the clique! For the summer series, I only have Massie and Dylan, but I don't have Alicia yet! I have all the regular books except Bratfest at Tiffany's. But I skimmed through Bratfest at Tiffany's at the bookstore, and I kind of got the *idea* of it. |
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cookygirl202
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bria6785
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martyluver23: OF COURSE we're still friends! I ah-dore you! (Sorry, I sound like Massie from the Clique books. Do you read them?) Please vote for mine! Yours, bria6785 |
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softballchick20
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cookygirl202, i bet drama club is AWESOME!! u probably rock @ swimming. write back! softballchick20 |
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you_make_me_smile
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here is the same story but i edited it go to think pink and grab your favorite shirt and on the tag there will be the next message so Avery and Maeve ran to Think Pink and grabbed the t-shirt of the rack and it read now go to school and ask Mrs.Field for a late slip and you'll find the next message"this is getting crazier and crazier by the minute." said Maeve. "I know, but i don't want to be late for class so lets go!" Shouted Avery who was already out the door of ThinkPink! "okay"said Maeve who was running after Avery. When they got to school they asked Mrs.Field for a late slip and under the Late Slip there was another message. the Message read.... hope you like it! please vote for it. i haven't mine in such a long time! love ya always Smiley xoxo |
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martyluver23
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bria6785, Sorry i've been gone so long!!! We're still friends right? Well i'll try 2 b here more! martyluver |
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abz
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Ppppppppppppppplease vote for mine, i have never had one posted yet! --abz  |
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abz
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....U think that your done, right? Wrong, I've got one more special assignment for you...it involves all of your friends, but u can't tell them, meet them at the park 3:30 sharp, be there or be-ware!The girls looked at each other and were both wide eyed, what should they do?Should they tell an adult should they not go, but if they did not go it said beware, what does this all mean, Avery and Maeve just did not know."I think we should do it"!Maeve said with a smile on her face, as she said it nonchalantly.Just before Avery could say what she wanted to say, Dillon came up and asked them what they were reading, Avery nudged Maeve and said...... |
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#1jobrosfan
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| now that you,ve completed this head over to dillon johnson and tell him the duck meats quarell...the duck meets quarel maeve thought, what does that mean maeve asked avery, i don't know she responde butit sounds like mabye dillon is a part of this. Well im eager to find out what it means so come on lets hurry schools almost starting, maeve exclaimed. when they got to dillon maeve blurted out "the duck meets quarell" and ran off.Dillon stayed there frozen with a confused look on his face...Maeve, maeve wait up he started to say... | |
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babyv221813
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| ...another assignment complete! very good! You may be confused right now- boy are we ever, Avery added in- but don't worry. finish this last assignment and it will all make sense. your last assignment is... | |
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cookygirl202
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| sbchick- YAY your here! My room is still it's old, boring, pink and purple self (as u might be able to tell, those ARE NOT my fave. colors! LOL) your dog most totally sweet and cute! the only thing I'm doing is Drama school and swim team! | |
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bria6785
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Good job. Now, go to the Logan airport and stand just outside security. When you see a man in a bright yellow raincoat, stop him and jostle his left arm. You'll find your next clue. Maeve whistled through her front teeth. "You up for it, Ave?" She asked, sipping some of the ice hot chocolate. "Yep!" Avery replied. The two girls caught a taxi to the airport and walked all the way up to the edge of the security line. "Look, look!" Maeve jumped up and down. "There he is!" Avery raced up to the man in the yellow coat, shook his left arm, and picked up the note that fell out of his sleeve. He gave her an odd look. Avery unfolded the paper, which was a burnt orange color, and read aloud... |
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