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Have you ever played that game where one person starts a story, then another person adds a sentence, and another person adds a sentence, and it goes on and on and on? The BSG and I LOVE to play that at Tower sleepovers, and the stories always turn out really crazy and funny!

Wanna play? I’ll start the story:

“One Saturday, the BSG were sitting in Montoya’s bakery like usual, drinking huge red mugs of hot chocolate with tons of whipped cream on top. Suddenly, the door opened, and they were totally shocked to see a space alien walk in! Maeve was so surprised she spit her mouthful of hot chocolate all over Katani. But Avery stood up and…

horseluvr84: .... said well, I don't believe that much that THIS is an alien. i think the yurtmeister is up to it again, or IS he?......

wizkid52: ..."I know, it looks so real," Isabel said."Well, maybe we should invite it to school." The rest of the BSG could see where she was going with it.
"You're right. our science teacher would LOVE to run some tests."
The alien sqeaked.
eee!And in a very robotic, and sloppy way, it said, "I-don't, um, enjoy,yes, uh, tests. I-usually, well, um FAIL! Yes, that's it. I fail-the-important-tests."
Charlotte stood up. "Well, too bad. This could be the article of the century and I'm not going to miss out on it." She and Avery took the alien by each arm and dragged it down Harvard Street, all the way to Abigail Adams, despite obvious struggles...

BSGLover123: ...but when they got to AAJH Mrs.Field says "What in the world is that?!" Avery said "It's an alien from outer space and we just wanted to see if one of the science teacher's can do some tests on him." when Avery said this the alien was struggling to get out. Avery and Charlotte tryed to hold on tight but he got free. and...

BSG girl111:
...they chased after him. after running into the library they saw him go into the science store. "Trapped!" said Maeve. "Listen all i wan tis to find my family." said the alien. "what do you mean?" avery said. " well when we got on board to our plane for our yearly earth trip to get some sun i knew something bad would happen. but not this bad. and when our plane crash landed...

sidnee#8: ... I was so post to go and get help from something but that is when I smelled something really good comming from that bakery and though mom and dad would not mind if I got some food I am really hungry and I can't find someone or something if I am hungry (because then I am cranky and you don't want me getting cranky!)So anyway I am so post to be getting...

teddybear916: ...a pizza." "A pizza?" asked Charlotte incredulously. "Yes" said the alien. "My alien family loves pizza with anchovies." "Anchovies, ewww!" Maeve shrieked. "We like it," the alien told Maeve...

qvhlover: ...but Maeve still wrinkled her nose in disgust. "Well," Avery piped up, "lets take it to get some pizza!" Slowly the rest of the BSG led the alien to the pizza parlor around the corner, Marty nipping at the alien's feet all the way. That's when Katani looked up in shock and saw...

sassygirl900: ..."Maeve it's probably just your dad and you came up with the whole scheme since you looove acting." No guys I swear I didnt do this",said Maeve. " Oh sure , yah right see ill prove it." Avery got up to pull of the mask but it wouldn't budge, not one inch.The BSG grabbed thier mugs and ran for it not looking back they all went safetly to the tower where they recapped what had happened. The next day the BSg were walking and saw a poster that said " Alien Spaceship Movie" (filming on Beacon Street ). Isabel exclaimed " That wasn't an alien from outer space , it was just a hungry actor!"

THE END
LOL...that turned out sooooo funny! Let's do another one! Only this time, YOU get to pick what happens next. Use the little pink hearts under each comment box to vote for your favorite. I'll post the sentence with the most hearts. When you see a new sentence, write what you think the NEXT sentence should be. That way we can keep going!

OK, here's how it starts...

Isabel had just walked out of math class when Maeve came running up to her in the hallway. "Omigosh Isabel! I have to tell you something right now!" "Calm down, Maeve. What is it?" Isabel asked. Maeve glanced around nervously to make sure nobody was listening, then she leaned in and whispered...

sidnee#8:  ..."Dillon asked me out on a real date!!!! And that is not even the best part!! Guess what he also said...

izzybee: ...he also said that he found out that Nick Montoya is going to ask out Charlotte,too!!" Isabel replied...

actressangie: ...Isabel gasped. "Oh my god I!!...oh." Isabel suddenly lost all excitment. "What is it? What's wrong?" asked Maeve. "I thought...I thought Nick might have actually liked me. No one has ever liked me before." A tear leaked out of Isabel's eye and she quickly wiped it away. "I've got to go." her voice quavered as she spoke to Maeve. Her eyes brimming with tears she...

teddybear916: ...fled from the room before anyone could see the great globs of wet tears flooding down her cheeks. "Isabel? Isabel?!" Maeve called. But Isabel just kept going without looking back. Then Charlotte approached. "What's with Isabel?" she asked softly. Maeve gulped. How was she going to put this to Charlotte? "Um, Char," Maeve began...

advice girl!: ..."Well Dillon asked me out on a real date." Charlotte said "Oh that is great Maeve, but why is Isabel crying?" Maeve said "Because Dillon told me that Nick Montana was going to ask you out too! But when I told Isabel she thought that Nick liked her! Then I was going to tell her that I also herd that Kevin was going to ask her out too, but she ran away!" "Omigosh Nick is really going to ask me out?" Charlotte said "Yep" said Maeve! "That is great, but lets go fine Isabel and tell her that Kevin is going to ask her out... I bet if we tell her that she will feel way better! Or at least I hope so!" Charlotte said. Just then Nick came up and said...

dramaqueen333: ..."Um, Maeve, is it okay if I talk to Char in private? I have a really important question to ask her." Nick said hesitently. "Oh! Sure Nick, I'm gone! I'll go find Isabel! Bye Char!" Maeve replied exitedly. Nick cleared his throat. "OK, Char, I was wondering if...."

sidnee#8: ... "Well... if you would like to hang out at the bakery this Friday? No wait not the bakery I mean the movies... NO I mean meet me at the bakery and then go to the movies?" Charlotte Laughed and then said "you are starting to sound like me Nick!" Nick laughed and then said "so what do you think?" Charlotte said "well I will have to ask my dad first, but I would totally love to! I will call you tonight okay?" "Sure" said Nick "I will be waiting for you" then he turned around to leave and a piece of paper fell out of his pocket. Charlotte picked it up and said "oh Nick you dropped this!" He came back to get it when Charlotte was reading it and Charlotte said "wow Nick did you write this?" He said "oh ya I know it is really bad.." Charlotte cut him off and said "no it is really good! I did not know you wrote poems!" Well it is not something I tell everyone... I got to go call me later okay!" "Ya" said Charlotte.... So she went home and said hay dad Nick Montana asked me out oh Friday and I was wondering if I could go? He said.....

superstar12: ... "Is this the montoya boy?" he asked, sipping from his cup of coffe.
"Uh, yeah" charlotte said, shyly.
"You can go, aslong as you bring me back a cinamon bun, I love them!' he said as he sipped more of his coffe.
"Yes!" charlotte said to herself, as she dialed Nick's number.
"Hello? Nick?" she asked, fidgeting with her glasses.
"Charlotte?"
"yeah, my dad said I could go"
"Cool, how about tonight? at the bakery?" he asked. Charlotte could just imagine him grinning on the other end of the phone.
"see ya soon' charlotte smiled.
"Ya bye" he hung up
"Yes!" charlotte said, as she flung open her closet door and pulled out her new purple tee, jeans and ballet flats. An hour later Charlotte was outside the Bakery, she stepped inside only to see...

amatomboy29: ... Nick standing there holding gigantic box wrapped in purple paper, Charlotte's favorite color. "Here. This is for you.", Nick muttered, blushing madly, as she handed her the present. "Oh, Nick. You really didn't have to do this. What... there's air holes on this!" she said, bewildered as she lifted the lid and saw Orangina, the cat she lost in Paris, staring up at her. "How did you... what... ORANGINA!!!! How did you do this?!". "Well, I talked to Maeve to find out the perfect gift for you. She said they'd been planning this for a long time. So... she emailed Sophie and she found Orangina and sent her to me. I wrapped him up and here we are." "Oh, Nick..." That's when he kissed her. She couldn't believe it, but she loved it. And for ten whole seconds that how it was. "Oh, Nick..."


THE END
Oh my gosh! I'm totally blushing! You guys are soooo creative. I'm not sure if I'm ready to go on a real live date with Nick, but if I do, I hope it turns out like that!

OK, for the next story you need to know a little bit about the completely awesome and exciting stuff that happened to Avery when she visited her dad in Colorado...including meeting her new (cute AND cool) friend Jason! You can read all about it and see what other girls are saying on the Freestyle with Avery page!




Here's the story...

"We're back from the airport!" Avery's mom called up the stairs. Avery could feel her heart pounding. She hadn't seen Jason since she left Colorado. Would he still want to be friends? Would things be awkward? She ran down the stairs and bounced into the living room. Jason looked up from his suitcase and said...
amatomboy29: ...with a great big smile, "What's up? Did ya miss me?". "Was I supposed to?" she replied, laughing. They acted as though they had known each other forever, and Avery had never gone back to Boston. "Well", her mom said, looking fondly at Jason, "Jason's family that he had been living with had to move to Europe. So they asked Dad if he could stay with him. He said Jason would probably like it better here. He's gonna go to your school, and live in that guest room!". "OH MY GOSH! This is so incredible. So now I have 3 brothers. This is, like, so COOL!!! Wait, I gotta go IM the BSG and tell them this!". When she logged on, started a chat room. When all the BSG heard, they came rushing over. When Maeve saw Jason, she gushed...

bsgmea13: ..."Wow, Avery..." Avery recognized the tone. Maeve was in love- with Jason. Who knew?
"Someone's crushing," whispered Katani. The entire BSG knew how Maeve could get when she was in deep love.
"Is he taken?" asked Maeve, in a lovey-dovey sort of way.
"Not that I know of," said Charlotte. Avery shot her a look. She still couldn't gather her thoughts together about how she felt about Jason. She liked him, but was it as a friend...or for real?...

catlover111: ...Avery looked over at Jason, who was deep in conversation with Maeve. He looked like he was enjoying himself, and Maeve was flirting like crazy. Maeve was giggling and playing with her hair and Jason was laughing at her jokes. Avery just went and sat on the couch by herself.
After a while Avery's friends all left- except for Maeve. Jason came and sat down next to Avery. He said" Wow, your friends are great!! And get this, I'm going to the movies with Maeve tomorrow night!". Maeve came over and added " I hope you don't mind since, you know, Jason's here visiting you". Tears filled Avery's eyes and she said...

unicorngirl: ..."oh, I dont mind. I'm going to go and help with lunch, by!" Avery ran into the kitchen, and broke done into tears. Maeve entered the kitchen. When she saw Avery, a worried expression filled her face. Avery saw her, and hastily grabbed an onion and a knife, to make it seem like she was crying because of the onion. But it was too late, Maeve had seen her, and Jason was right behind her.
"Avery," Jason began...

happyluckythingylover: ...Avery pivoted around on her heel and tried to wipe her eyes. But Jason already noticed she was upset, and frowned. "Um Maeve, can we have a second?" Jason asked. Maeve nodded and stepped out. Jason shot her a grateful smile. "Ave, I'm so sorry. I really am! I mean, Maeve is just...." Jason paused awkwardly, looking for the right word. "Prettier than me. I get it, Jase. She's practically a... whatchamacallit, Covergirl? I get it." Avery finished for him. Jason just sat on the ground and blushed deep red. He looked up at Avery. "No, Avery! You don't get it! I never wanted to go out with Maeve! I said yes because she's really nice, and I don't want to hurt her feelings! I wanted to go out with you, Ave, not Maeve!" Jason finished his outburst and hid his head in his hands. He started either laughing or crying, Avery couldn't tell. Avery gently tapped him on the back. "Jason? You, um, alright?" Jason stood up. "Yeah. I'm alright. I just don't get how it's possible to make such a fool of myself!" Avery giggled and smiled. She was gonna do it! Or was she? Was Avery nervous? Finally making up her mind, Avery stood on tiptoe and gave Jason a little, teeny weeny peck on the cheek. Both of the blushed. Suddenly, Maeve walked in. "Oh...

amatomboy29: ..."Hey are you guys mad at me wuzzup?" "No... no, not mad really, it's just..." Avery stared at her shoes. "Just what? Trust me I was not listening to you guys. I heard that American Idol on t.v. Hurry up! I'm gonna miss the next song!!!" Maeve was desperate. "Okay, here's the deal. Are you sure you want to know?" Jason asked. Maeve nodded and her red curls bounced. "Look, you're really sweet and all, but I mean, we just met. We should take it slow. In the mean time, would it be okay if I go out with Avery?" Jason sounded like he had practiced that. "Well, sure, that's understandable." Maeve smiled, but there was a tiny tear on her cheek. She quickly brushed it away. "Thanks so much, Maeve.", Avery hugged her friend, something she never did. "Yeah, you're sweet!" Jason gave her a small, quick kiss on the cheek. Then he gave Avery a REAL kiss. Her first one ever. Her face glowed. But Maeve looked mad. "While, you guys stand here kissing, there are starving children somewhere!" she stomped out of the kitchen and slammed the door; apperently she was angry. "What happened? I thought she was okay with it." Jason looked concerned.
"Well I'm not. Hey, Avery, why aren't you with your BOYFRIEND?" Maeve wrote later that night after Avery had logged on "chat room bsg. "Cuz I wanna b with my buds" Avery typed. When maeve had thought this over, she typed...

teddybear916: ... "yeah, well, do u mean katani, charlotte, and isabel? b/c im sure u don't mean me. jason-stealer!" Avery read Maeve's message, shocked. "but u have dillon. he likes u." Avery's bluntness came in handy in this case. "oh puh-leeze," Maeve typed. Avery could just imagine Maeve saying this to her, her voice dripping sarcasm. "c'mon girls, please," Isabel cut in. "let it be, izzy. obviously avery doesnt care about the starving children she could have saved while kissing jason!" Katani, confused, replied, "will someone explain this to me? starving children? porquoi?" Maeve's angry rampage unleashed on poor unsuspecting Katani. "just butt out!" With that, Maeve logged off the chatroom. "hey ave, what's her deal?" Charlotte asked. Avery looked at the message, prepared to tell the whole twisted love triangle, and began to answer. "well, i got my first kiss. but maeve is caught up in it all. it started when..."

skywriter: ...Later that night, Maeve called Avery. "What?" Avery said, answering her phone angrily. "I just wanted to apologize," Maeve explained. "You're totally right. I guess I just freaked out when Jason said he didn't like me. Can we still be BFFs?" "Of course, no prob!" Avery answered. "I stick with my BSGs over any boy, any day. Period. BSG for life!"


THE END


I hope you liked the way I ended that one! All your ideas were really interesting and dramatic--but I gotta say, I hope nothing like that ever actually happens to the BSG!




Time for a new story now! Yay! Here's how it starts...

Katani burst into homeroom, out of breath. "Girls! Listen up! You are never going to believe what I just overhead Grandma Ruby saying in the hallway! She said...she said that they might be closing Abigail Adams Junior High!" All the BSG gasped. "Oh nooooo!" Maeve wailed. "Wait, I have an idea," Charlotte said. "I know we can save the school. All we have to do is...

happyluckythingylover: Convince everyone otherwise." Charlotte suggested.
"But how? It may be pretty hard to," thought Isabel out loud.
"I HAVE AN IDEA!" Avery burst out. Everyone giggled at how loudly and randomly she said that. "We should make a poster about how important Abigail Adams Junior High is!" Avery continued.
"And have everyone sign it!" Maeve suggested. Everyone nodded approvingly. Charlotte fiddled with her funky purple glasses like she did when she was thinking.
"That's a great idea, Ave! What if we had a group of people, including us, meet every so often to organize it all?" Charlotte implied.
"Oh! And we can have a sign up sheet for the group!" Isabel added.
"I like the way u guys think! We can meet at Montoya's today..." Katani said, her eyes twinkling.

This plan had to work. AAJH WOULD stay in business. It would just take a little work, and a whole lot of determination.

That afternoon at Montoya's, Avery piped right up. She said...

pandalover613: "OMG! I have a great idea!"
"Calm down Ave." Charlotte giggled. Avery was bouncing up and down in her seat with excitement.
"I can't! I have this great idea! So, listen to this. We can raise a ton of money to help save AAJH. We can do an auction thing. Everyone in school can bring 2 items to put in the auction. Then we use the gym to do the auction in. Isabel can draw posters for the auction and draw pictures to auction off, and Katani might even design some clothing and Charlotte can write books. Maeve can even video tape herself doing a movie and sell that!" Avery exclaimed.
"That's a great idea!" Maeve said, her eyes sparkling. "Finally I will be famous!"
"This isn't about getting famous, Maeve. It's about saving Abigal Adams Junior High." Isabel said.
"I know, I know." Maeve said, calming down.
The next day, the BSG presented their idea to their homeroom class. Everyone loved the idea. Everyone except for 2 people in particular. Anna and Joline. As soon as the class quieted down, Anna said...

leaofparis: "Who cares? If we let this old dump close, we can go to J** School on the other end!"
"Why would you want to go to stupid J** School?" Avery butted in.
"'Cause J** School is soo much cooler. They have three swimming pools and dances every week!"
"I'm in!" piped up a voice.
The BSG turned to see who it was.
"Great, Dillon," said Anna.
Then she walked over and planted her lips on Dillon, who said...

happyluckythingylover:  "Um..." Dillon managed to say. This next move surprised EVERYONE. With Anna still standing near his desk with a hopeful look on her face, he stood up and kissed her right back. Maeve turned the color of her hair and hid her face in her arms.

"I'm out of this whole idea! Totally OUT! And Dillon, you are NOT who I thought you are!" fumed Maeve. She stomped out of the classroom and to the restroom, her red hair flying behind her. Isabel jumped up and followed her to the bathroom, and muffled sobs waited into the classroom.

"You know what Dillon? You just broke Maeve's heart. This is a disaster!" Charlotte surprisingly added.

"But... I just wanted to... Dillon began...

denimgirl07: "I just wanted to break Maeve's heart. MUAH HA HA!!!!!!" he said in a strange, robotic voice. And then Dillon's eyes turned green and his hands turned into to pinchers!
"CRAB BOY!!!" he screamed, and he chased Charlotte down the hall, try to pinch her!
"Aaaaah!" screamed Charlotte as she ran.
Then, all of the other students in the room except for the BSG, and including the teacher, turned into evil crab robots.
"This is why the school is closing!!! SO IT CAN BE A CRAB-ROBOT SCHOOL!" screamed the crab-teacher in a robot voice.
The BSG ran and ran out of the school before the evil crab robots could get them.
Huffing and puffing, Katani said, "OMG! We left Maeve and Isabel in the bathroom..."

mome123: "We have to go save them!" said Katani. She, Charlotte, and Avery dodged the mutant crab-boy robot army and headed for the bathroom. They couldn't see anything when they walked in, only green nausiating smoke. The girls started to cough. "Mae-cough-ve! Isa-cough-bel!" Avery managed. "Mua-ha-ha!" A scary robotic voice said. "Oh-no! The only thing left of them is there shoes!" Charlotte cried. Maeve's ballet flats, and Isabel's high-tops lay on the floor covered in green slime...

cookygirl202: ... and then Katani woke up. She was sweating and her heart was beating WAY fast. Oh thank god! It was just a dream... TOO FREAKY FOR WORDS! she thought. But it was only Saturday morning. But part of it was true; her grandma had told her that the school might have to close because they didn't have enough teachers and nobody would apply for a job. She was hoping that it didn't have to. AAJH ROCKED!
She logged on her mac laptop and found the BSG online.
flickchic- hey gril
flickchic- oops girl!
4kicks- yo!
lafrida- hey!
skywriter- hi
kgirl- I HAD THE WEIRDEST DREAM!!
4kicks- me 2!
flickchic- it reminded me of a movie
lafrida- mine was just plain creepy
skywriter- SCARY!!! like something you would read in a book!
kgirl- we were at school and it was about to close down, and dillon kissed anna and every one turned into mutant crabs!
4kicks- DID U COME TO MY DREAM CUZ I HAD THE SAME ONE!
skywriter- mine too!
lafrida- me three
flickchic- i know what your talking about-- I CANNOT BELIEVE DILLON!
kgirl- this is SERIOUS maeve. THE SCHOOL IS CLOSING DOWN FOR REAL!
flickchic- in that case let's get working!
lafrida- meet u at montoya's in 10!

Kgirl turned of the computer and ran out the door and headed to Montoya's. When she got there...

bria6785: "SURPRISE!" Grandma Ruby, The BSG, and all her other friends shouted as she opened the door. "Hun," Mrs. Fields began. "The school isn't closing. That was just an excuse to get you here. You work so hard all the time...and you forgot it was your birthday!" Katani's eyes brimmed with tears. "You guys are the best!" She whispered, and she meant it.

THE END

I loved that story! It took a lot of crazy twists and turns, but  I think that just made it even better! I can't wait to see what you guys do with this one...


When Maeve opened her locker on Thursday morning, something fluttered to the ground. She bent over to pick it up. It was a square of notebook paper folded over and over again into a tiny rectangle. As she unfolded the mysterious note, she wondered who had slipped it into her locker. For once she was the first BSG at school that day. Inside, in scrawled handwriting, the note read: "You have been selected for a special assignment. Meet in Room 203 at 7:25 am for more instructions." Maeve looked at her pink-heart-covered watch. It was already 7:23! She whirled around and ran smack into...

pandalover613: ...Avery.
"Hi Maeve! What's up?" Avery asked.
"Can't talk now,Ave. I got to go to room 203." Maeve said. "Bye."
"Wait, Maeve!" Avery called after her but Maeve was gone.
Maeve ran around the buiding, searching for room 203. She walked around and around, but she couldn't find room 203. Then she heard footsteps behind her. It was Avery.
"Maeve. There is no room 203!" Avery said.
"Then how am I supposed to get there?" Maeve asked.
Suddenly, the girls saw a room they had never noticed before. Room 203.
"Ave, this is creepy." Maeve said.
"Don't be scared. I'll come with you." Avery said.
The two girls entered room 203. Then, a light shone down on a table. The girls crept towards the table and saw that on the table, there was a...

dramaqueen333: ...another paper. It was pink. It had a sparkly border. It read:
SPECIAL ASSIGNMENT
Go to Yuris and buy the greenest apple there. Eat it. These instructions are important and it is vital that you do this. "OK, that's just plain weird." Avery declared. "You can totally say that again." Maeve replied. "But I have to do it." She ran off with Avery at her heels. When she got to Yuris, she did just as the instructions said. She bought the greenest apple, and ate it. When she got to the core, there was a tiny peice of paper. It was another assignment. It read...

skywriter101: ...Good Job in completing your assignment. Your next assignment is to go to Montoya's Bakery and buy an iced hot chocolate from Nick Montoya. And ONLY Nick Montoya. Maeve looked at Avery. They both dashed out of Yuri's and went across the street to Montoya's. It had the best pastries in the world. Maeve let out a sigh of releif when she saw Nick behind the counter, putting a fresh batch of those yummy fried cookies on the counter.
"Hi, Nick." Maeve said, smiling at Nick. He smiled back.
"Can we get an iced hot chocolate?" Avery asked.
"Sure." He fixed one up and gave it to them. Maeve thanked him and looked at the piece of paper taped to the mug. She unfolded it and it read...


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BSG girl111 writes:

"OMG no way". "yea" afetrtalking more about ti they decided to tell charlotte when the head nick and dillon talking " dude i cant believe ur gonna trick charlotte and embarass her in front of everybody".dillonsaid "when they heard that Maeve and Isabel both said together.............
 

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helena96 writes:

"Are you sure?" Isabel asked "cuz I just saw Nick snuggling with Joline. "And i dont think they were joking."
"Maybe Joline is a witch and gave Nick a magic love potion."Maeve said
"Yeah a evil one at that."Isabel said.
Suddenly Nick walked over to them...
 

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helena96 writes:

"I wonder how Charlotte feels about.We all know Nick really likes Charlotte,"Isabel said
Suddenly Charlotte ran past them onto the girls bathroom sobbing."Whats up with her?"asked Maeve
Isabel looked worried "I dont know,"She said "But i think we are going to find out."And she walked into the bathroom.
 

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preteenfun2 writes:

Wow said Isabel amazing well I just got a...
 

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bsgirls815 writes:

..."Well, you better tell Charlotte to watch out. I heard that Anna is going to steal her man." Maeve looked puzzled. "Its true, right after math class I heard Anna saying...
 

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actressangie writes:

...Isabel gasped. "Oh my god I!!...oh." Isabel suddenly lost all excitment. "What is it? What's wrong?" asked Maeve. "I thought...I thought Nick might have actually liked me. No one has ever liked me before." A tear leaked out of Isabel's eye and she quickly wiped it away. "I've got to go." her voice quavered as she spoke to Maeve. Her eyes brimming with tears she...
 

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saltypeanut122 writes:

"OMG! Your kidding! Thats so unbelievible and not good..." "why is that not good?," Meave asked nervesly. " Didn't you hear? Earlier today Charlotte told me..."
 

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horseluvr84 writes:

. when charlotte heard, she freaked out. "You know I have never went a date before. Oh, now what do i do?????" "Charlotte calm down." Maeve said. "Dates are easy." "Easy for u to say." Charlotte said. You know what else nick told me?"He said......
 

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amatomboy29 writes:

"Did i just hear that? Omigosh! What do I do? What do I say? What do I wear?" Charlotte just walked up and had heard Maeve. Katani started to give her advice, "Well, act like your self, talk about whatever he is, and I'll make you some clothes." "Shut up! here he comes!" Maeve whispered. "Hey Char," he said, "Wanna go out to the movies sometime... like tomorrow?" "Uh-um-errrrrr...I'll be right back!" and she ran off to the bathroom. Maeve said, "What she means is yes! Of course!". Then she and the other bsg ran after Charlotte...
 

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as1006974 writes:

"NO! way there is no way that Nick would ask Charlotte after the date we went on. So what did she tell him?" nervously asked Maeve
 

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charlover82 writes:

"That is SO great for you and Nick. I'm SO excited for you two! It seems like Nick is finally coming to his senses about asking you out. Too bad no one wants to ask ME out!" Isabel blushed and smiled,
"That would be SO cool if we could go on a double date!" Charlotte blinked as Maeve almost shouted with pure excitement.
"I can't WAIT!"
 

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charlover82 writes:

Isn't that SO amazing? It could be kind of like a double date! Like in the movies!
 

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bsg_charlotte_ramsey_88 writes:

"Um, Isabel," Maeve said uncertainly, "are you sure you weren't misinformed? 'Cuz Nick is right over there asking out....................................................................."
 

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E4ever writes:

"That is awesome!" Isabel whispered. "We need Katani to help us!" The two girls found Charlotte. "Charlotte!" They said...
 

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peepsinthehouse writes:

"What!?!?!" said Charlotte, suddenly snapping to attention. "is he really?"
"there he is!! he's coming tworads us!"...
 

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sidnee#8 writes:

...... OMG Maeve that is awesome! I can't believe it, it is just to cool for words! Has Nick asked Charlotte yet? I don't think so said Maeve, but don't tell her we won't want to give it away.... it would just not be as....well.... WONDERFUL! Got it said Isabel! All of the sudden Nick came up to them and said .......
 

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skywriter1997 writes:

Hey waitup!Isabel!Idon't want Charlotte I want YOU!Nick,said despartly.
 

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horseluvr84 writes:

... He asked, well, um, he asked for me to, well ok. Valentine's day is soon and he wants to make a card. He needs to add a poem. "Great" said Isabel. "Poems." "Isabel, you know I stink at writing".........
 

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BSGforever2008 writes:

he said that he wants to bring hershey chocolate and we can do gym
 

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mileyrocks96 writes:

saw nick being crazy and weird and then charlette said to nick was that a joke or what
 

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BSGfan12 writes:

"What?" Isabel said anxiously. "He said that..." Maeve trailed off. "WHAT?" Isabel demanded. "Well, I...he said...
 

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10jill10 writes:

he said he loves my eyes.then a week later Maeve came up to me and said she was going to
 

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Miley_Ramsey writes:

"What?" asked Isabel. "You won't believe it! He was at the hospital visiting his dad when he saw your mom and guess who was with her...
 

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izzybee writes:

...he also said that he found out that Nick Montoya is going to ask out Charlotte,too!!" Isabel replied...
 

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Bopsytwindancer2 writes:

...that he wants you to draw a portrait of us together for us to keep forever!!Isn't that great!!!"....
 

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Sparkle234123 writes:

Dillon said he was really sorry! "Listen Maeve,"he said. "I'm sorry! I wasn't thinking right!" "What happened first?" Maeve asked through her tears and stuffy nose. "I uh, kissed you first,"he responded a little bit sad sounding. "But Maeve, she's just amazing!" "I thought you though I was amazing," Maeve said in a faint whisper. "You are Maeve!" he whailed. "PLEASE don't put me throught his!" "Leave me alone," Maeve said in a sassy tone!" Dillon went towards the door, but before he left...
 

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DreamGirl#1 writes:

LOL...I luv your Webscreen>.....LOL!
 

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Sparkle234123 writes:

But Nobody believed her! So Maeve went up to her room and let the tears fall down her face. She cried and cried until there was a knock at the door. "Go away!" Maeve screamed. "Ok". The voice sounded familiar to her. "Dillon?" She asked in disbelief. He entered her room. "Wow! Lot's of pink!" Dillon cried shielding his eyes. Maeve giggled a little bit. What are you doing here?" "Well," he started. "I hear you cheated on your math test an- he didn't get to even finish his word when Maeve cut him off. "What are you talking about?! I didn't cheat! Don't you know that?!" Well, yeah, but Maeve, seriously, you NEVER get A's! he replied a little bit angry. "Hey!" Maeve replied even more furious than before. "I would NEVER cheat! Why are you always so negitive towards me?!" "Well,"he started his face red with anger "Maybe I still like you!" "Well, Maybe I like still you!" Maeve screamed. And then, Dillon did the biggest moment of Maeve's life. He leaned over, and kissed her. When his lips left Maeve's she fell onto her bed, wide-eyed, and stared up at the ceiling. "Too much?" Dillon asked nervously. "uh, no," Maeve responded still in shock. "Dillon, I'll IM you later," "Ok, he said and went out the door of her room.She immidatley went over to her shelf and grabbed her diary. She wrote: Dear Diary,Dillon was just over. He kissed me! Wow! It was big. I have to go. I told him that I would IM him. Yay! She went over to her computer. Her friend Isabelle was online too. Fabulous! She couldn't wait to brag to her friend that had just doubted her! "Hey Iz! Guess what?!" Maeve typed. Isabelle responded with," Just a sec, I'm talking to Dillon! Great news! He just asked me out!" Maeve quickly told her friend she had to go and threw her face into her pillow. She cried for a long time. Too long because Dillon called her cell phone. "Hello?" She asked holding back her tears. "Maeve, I think Isabelle told you what happened," Dillon said quitly. "Yeah," Maeve said, and then...
 

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Sparkle234123 writes:

"But I didn't copy off her paper!" Maeve wailed. "I didn't! I didn't! I didn't!
 

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bsglvr227 writes:

"I aced my math test, but.." Isabel was happy for Maeve, but she was wondering what the "but" was for. Isabel asked Maeve quietly "Maeve you seemed so happy, what's wrong?" Maeve didn't seem so sure if it was a good idea to tell Isabel, but then she realized she was one of her best friends. Maeve whispered to Isabel "Anna caught my math grade on my paper and said to the crow "Maeve copied my math paper, she doesn't really deserve the A, I did all the work." Isabel was real angry with Anna, after all she hated cheaters, but she knew that Maeve would never copy off ANYONES paper, even if she was bad at math. Maeve then said "I didn't copy off her paper, you know I wouldn't do that right Isabel?" Isable then said "Uh.. yeah right Maeve, of course you wouldn't copy of anyones paper, but.." Maeve was shocked, her own friend thought she copied off Annas paper! Isabel said "It's just you never got an A before, and Anna does sit next to you, she also is really good at math.. I'm sorry Maeve, but I don't know." Maeve was steaming, how could one of the BSG not belive in her? Maeve stomped off, trying to hold back tears. The crow catched up to Maeve and told her "Maeve, this is serious, if you really did copy of Anna's paper you can get into BIG trouble and get suspended." Maeve just stormed up, trying to wipe off her tears and then...
 

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mayflower writes:

The Tower" what about the tower? Isabel asked I can't just tell you, you have to see it for your self Maeve said.Both the girls ran down through Beacon street and ran to the Tower.When Maeve opened the trap door they both saw that........
 

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BSGlover123 writes:

that she actually got an B in math!!" I was so surprised when 'The Crow' told me. I was so happy i just couldn't wait to tell one of you guys" said Maeve"Oh wow we have to celebrate!! Congratulations Maeve! replied Isabel. When Maeve told the rest of the BSG they were really surprised too.Charlotte said "we should have a sleepover to celebrated!let's have it this Friday." "Ok" said the rest of the BSG. When Maeve told her mom she...

 

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BSGfan12 writes:

"You know the Mustard Monkey's right? I'm their lead singer?" Isabel nodded. "Well, guess who's performing at that huge benifit showcase this Saturday?" The excitement in Maeve's voice grew. Isabel's eyes grew as big as golf balls. Maeve smiled and nodded and instantly they started jumping around and squealing. But then...
 

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BSGfan12 writes:

"I've been picked to be featured on the cover of the latest issue of GoGirl magazine!" Maeve bounced and squealed with excitement. Isabel's mouth formed a large o. "Have you told anyone?" Maeve hung her head and shook it back and forth. Isable raised her eyebrows. "You haven't?? Why not?" Maeve looked up and said in a tiny voice. "Well...
 

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writegirl writes:

"my moms having a baby". maeve said."what"!........................
 

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pandagirl writes:

OMG, Isabell, you wont believe this, but Dillon asked you out!" He was like, hey Maeve. Does Isabell like me?
 

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lila99 writes:

i love the story
 

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cookygirl202 writes:

"Ms. Rodrieguez just told me. Her brother or someone is a director. Of a new movie. How cool is that?" "Oh." Isabel looked disapointed. "I know that this is not gonna sound real, but I am so not lying. You know how the bsg has gone through so much together? Well the guy's looking for a thing about our kinda story, hating, liking, crushes, adventures, ect. And guess who told him we'd be perfect for the part and guess who said o.k.?" "OMG! I can't believe we are gonna be in a movie! That's too cool lets go tell the rest of the bsg!"

 

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sidnee#8 writes:

... Dillon asked me out on a real date!!!! And that is not even the best part!! Guess what he also said...
 

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horseluvr84 writes:

" I have SUCH bad luck. Not even Matt can cure my badmathaphobia" Isabel's eyes grew wide. "Badmathaphobia? Come on Maeve. let's chill. We can ask charlotte (word nerd) what that means to find a cure." Isabel whipered. They raced to Charlotte. When charlotte heard, she nearly fainted. "was it the word? or the way I dramticly stated it?" maeve wondered......
 

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WorldWideRisingStar writes:

..."I'm going to get to be president for a day! I entered a contest and won! The best part is.."
 

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Chichiag writes:

That's what Katani Looked up in shock and saw...

Another alien! It looked like tha alien's mother.

"Is this your child?" Maeve asked bravly.

"Mine?" The other alien said, shocked.

"Yes... We... uh..." Avery started, but then...
 

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Lunacmt writes:

...the alien and said,"OMG, is that a real alien?; I've always wanted to see a real live alien on earth! Then she fainted by surprise. All the girls helped wake her up again. After the girls camled down Katani they all went to eat pizza with the alien. Then they helped fix the alien's plane so his family can go home. And they lived happyily ever after.
 

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ilovefashion writes:

A very famous celebrity named Venice Doubletree walked in wearing a designer dress and cried out "Don't touch that alien!" The BSG all looked at each other with wide eyes. And then...
 

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sassygirl900 writes:

Maeve it's probably just your dad and you came up with the whole scheme since you looove acting." No guys I swear I didnt do this",said Maeve. " Oh sure , yah right see ill prove it." Avery got up to pull of the mask but it wouldn't budge, not one inch.The BSG grabbed thier mugs and ran for it not looking back they all went safetly to the tower where they recapped what had happened. The next day the BSg were walking and saw a poster that said " Alien Spaceship Movie" (filming on Beacon Street ). Isabel exclaimed " That wasn't an alien from outer space , it was just a hungry actor!"
 

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Miley_Ramsey writes:

"And YOU don't have to eat it!" The alien said lookind insulted. "All right! Let's go get some pizza!" Avery shouted. "Wait, wait, wait!" Katani said. Everyone looked at her. "First, we can't go running around with an alien! Are you out of your minds? And my clothes are ruined thanks to SOMEBODY! No way, we are not gonna go! Not until everyone looks decent for the rainstorm that just started!" Everyone looked out the window. Suddenly the alien started doing something really weird...
 

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ilovegp writes:

Then Avery went to the alien and asked,"Hey, I like anchovies!" THe alien asked Maeve...
 

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CamiGabi writes:

"if I could only eat a slice of pizza with anchovies my family would know where I am beacuse of the smell and they would look for me"
 

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writegirl writes:

........then the alien says " ok, you caught me"! " I'm a alien"! " ok,duh we know that" Maeve said." but im not just any alien, im henry yurt"! " * gasp* " Charlotte gasped. " gotcha"! henry said as he took off the costume." henry"! all the bsg said." you should have seen your faces"! henry yelled. " that was the most realistic alien I've ever seen "! Maeve said. " yeah but the noises were so ......... real"! Avery said. " the costume has a machine to make the noises"! henry said, still laughing.
 

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actress616 writes:

"Haha! Very funny! We know it's you Yurt!" Avery was pulling the head mask off..except... it wouldn't come off. The alien started speaking some jibberish. Then... more aliens came! All the BSG started to scream! "Wait are the aliens laughing", Katani asked. "It's us", Anna, Joline and Kiki said.......
 

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beaconstreet_girl writes:

..."and I really don't appreciate you making fun of what we eat!" so, the 5 girls took the alien to the nearest pizza place,but when the alien asked for a pizza with anchovies, the man told him that they don't serve that type of pizza."What!" the alien asked in disbelief,"what type of pizza place doesn't serve anchovies!!" the girls tried to calm him down but,....
 

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princess charlotte writes:

i think that charlotte ramsy is not going to move no more but some people say she is.
 

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Gemma_Doyle_Rox writes:

"Well, the alien can like anchovies if he wants to, OK Maeve?" Katani said. "Why don't you tell us your name"
"X'farblonpoodgropolis" it said, "but most earthlings just call me Farpoo"
"Well nice to meet you Farpoo. It's just your luck that we're having a special pizza lunch today and I'm sure we can find some anchovies."
"O thank you! My family will be grateful!" said Farpoo. So Farpoo stayed until lunch and got his pizza and gave all the kids his address (12887 Longfabulashra Sector 7, 48230)and they all promised to write. He then brought the pizza back to his family. They got their plane fixed and were on their way home.
 

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limited2 writes:

"Well, actually," said the alien, "My name is Frankfurt. And, Miss, you must eat anchovies if you want to be my friend."
 

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mydadandmomrock! writes:

Meave looked at the alien confused. "Huh?" she asked.
"My brother will die without his pizza!" said the alien quickly.
"Ok then" Said Meave.

A couple minutes later Isabel walked into the room.
"Hi, Meave!" she said.
"Hey, Isabel." "you know Im kinda getting a little freaked out here." she said
"OK" said Isabel. "then lets go to the mall.
The time they got to the mall....
 

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beaconstreet_girl writes:

"there is this great pizza place down the street," said Avery,"we could take you there."
"really," said the alien,"you'd do that for me."
"as long as I don't have to eat any anchovies, I'll come." said maeve....
 

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55345cello writes:

Maeve said back "Well we don't like anchovies and don't see why you do but please let the science teacher do tests?" The alien said" NO!!!" Just then the science teacher walked in...
 

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bsglvr227 writes:

Isabel started cracking up, she knew Maeve got dicusted with a lot of foods. So, Isabel said "We LIKE anchovy pizza right, guys?" Charlotte piped in "Of course!" Katani, Maeve, and Avery just shook their heads yes.The alien asked if they could go get some and Isabel agreed, although the rest of the BSG weren't so thrilled about it. When they walked into the pizza place, Nick and Dillion were there sharing a pepperoni pizza. Nick called to the alien "Hey Yurt, you still trying to get people to buy you pizza?" The alien looked very nervous. Avery was mad, she thought that it was Yurt all along! Yurt finally gave in and said "Darn it, I thought I had you guys!" Isabel said " No, we had you!" So, they all sat down and ate pizza.
 

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alliCAT11 writes:

"It gives us power to make humans do what we want them to do." said the Alien "What do you mean by that?" asked Avery. Then all of a sudden the alien threw his arms back and......
 

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groovygirl91 writes:

"Oh no, we really like our pizza with anchovies
on them.If it dosen't have them on it, we don't eat it."Avery gasped."Is there anything else we can get you Mr. Alien man?"she exclaimed quietly."Why, yes, there is one other thing."he said slyly."And what would that be?"Katani demanded."A kiss from you, Katani."he said cooly.The BSG gasped and said.........
 

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skierGIRL writes:

"It's one of the few fish left on my planet that we are free to eat without being arrested for consuming an endangered species so we occasionally come to earth to get pizza ingredients but I guess I over calculated what time our arrival would be".
 

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amatomboy writes:

"It makes our skin green and sleek.:" "Well," Katani said, "I think that you should try some new clothes!". The alien was wearing black soccer shorts, and a ripped up write hippie shirt with this wierd alein goo on it, no shoes or anything. Dillon came up and poked it, "Hey what's this? Like some kind of robot or Yurt in a costume?" "We"re not sure yet," Avery admitted, "but we think it..."
 

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gvhlover writes:

but Maeve still wrinkled her nose in disgust. "Well," Avery piped up, "lets take it to get some pizza!" Slowly the rest of the BSG led the alien to the pizza parlor around the corner, Marty nipping at the alien's feet all the way. That's when Katani looked up in shock and saw
 

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horseluvr84 writes:

...... "Well then don't make me a part of it. Please tell me, do they have anchovie free pizzarieas around here. I think im gonna be sick." Maeve said. The Bsg nodded in agreement. They dragged the alien out of the library, but then.......
 

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thinkpink202 writes:

Maeve shuddered at the thought of anchovies on a pizza.
"Are you sure you are an alien?" Charlotte asked.
"Of course," Replied the "alien", "Why?"
"It's just that you have some human-like qualities..."
 

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angel3808 writes:

...says, "Omigosh a real alien" Then Avery faints on the ground. The Alien says, "I'll take her to my spaceship." Then the alien carries Avery outside and is greated by many other aliens! "Let's take this girl to our spaceship to make her feel better," one of the aliens says. Sundenly there is a blinding flash of green light and they are gone. Up in the spaceship Avery wakes up and can't talk. She says, "Get me out of here!" then they send her back to earth.
 

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BSG girl111 writes:

"ok" lets get back on the subject " katani said. "do u hav any idea were ur family might be" avery asked. Charlotte was getting scared for the poor lost alien. Maeve was getting grossed out that the aliens loved anchovies. the alien said they might be at .................
 

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babymegan90 writes:

"Well okay" said avery. "Do you have any idea where your family could be" asked charlotte getting a little bit worried for the poor stranded alein. " Well,we landed in the dump" said the alein. "A dump" maeve skreiked, "guys im outta here" maeve continued asd she was tiptoeing away. "Not so fast drama queen" avery said,"we are going to help this little aleain find its family"...
 

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goldenangel3 writes:

I think it would be really cool if they made more mystery books!!!!!! I love mysteries. They rock! I also think that all of the BSG girls could never be nicer. I LOVE YA'LL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya'
goldenangel3
 

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BSGlover123 writes:

that if there is a pizza place close by he'll buy them a free pizza with No! anchovies. and then leave a go back to Planet Mars...
 

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teddybear916 writes:

...a pizza." "A pizza?" asked Charlotte incredulously. "Yes" said the alien. "My alien family loves pizza with anchovies." "Anchovies, ewww!" Maeve shrieked. "We like it," the alien told Maeve....
 

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Nicis2cute4u writes:

ok idk if this is the place 2 say this but i think this is really interesting. Its scary how much the BSG are like me. I like 2 draw,im spanish, i like 2 write, i luv clothes, im very athletic, and i luv dogs!!! Isnt that weird?
 

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hellobeacon writes:

I love all your books they are so ???????
 

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fashionpelle writes:

on Bcacon Street last night
 

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sidnee#8 writes:

... I was so post to go and get help from something but that is when I smelled something really good comming from that bakery and though mom and dad would not mind if I got some food I am really hungry and I can't find someone or something if I am hungry (because then I am cranky and you don't want me getting cranky!)So anyway I am so post to be getting............
 

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sharita writes:

we all got sperated and i been looking all yesterday.Then that when i walk in your house i did'nt mean for none of this to happen
 

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hedwig3567 writes:

the big coffe machine and the poured coffe all over him! Avery screamed "AHHH!!!!" OH NO! The alien heard! he started running after Avery....
 

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fleur11 writes:

but he got free and ran down the hall, but Nick and Dillion grabbed the alien before it could get any farther. Avery and Charlotte came up to them and so did Mrs. Fields. She looked closer at the alien then said "His face looks like a mask!"
She pulled off his mask and underneath was yes, of course the Yurtmeister.
then Mrs. Fields said "Mr. Yurt! what were You doind dressed as an alien?"
then he said "I was trying to get all the free cookies in Montaya's, and I would have gotton away with it, if it weren't gor you medeling BSG!
 

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Messy Monkey writes:

...ran back the way they came, past Montoya's, and yuri's store and down to Charlottes house. he ran up into the tower. the girls hurried after him, but none of them, including Avery, were as fast as him. they got to Charlottes house just in time to see the alien fly off in a space ship. "lucky he's gone," sid Katani. "aawww i wanted our teachers to do some tests on him," said Avery. suddenly they saw a huge light beam on Montoya's. as they started to run towards Montoya's they heard a blood curdling scream. it was...
 

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BSG girl111 writes:

they chased after him. after running into the library they saw him go into the science store. "Trapped!" said Maeve. "Listen all i wan tis to find my family." said the alien. "what do you mean?" avery said. " well when we got on board to our plane for our yearly earth trip to get some sun i knew something bad would happen. but not this bad. and when our plane crash landed..............
 

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Messy Monkey writes:

the rest of the bsg hurried after them. "you know this would make such a fantastic movie" said maeve " 5 innocent girls found an incredibly ugly alien, they did some tests on it and found out that..." Maeve and the other girls had stopped. they were all looking straight at the ugliest alien they had ever seen. "it's, it's... what is it?" asked katani all of the girls just stared. "hey he's gone" called Avery "shush!" said isabelle. Avery started to run after the alien when Charlotte pulled her back "i don't think we need to go after him Avery" Charlotte told her, "look' Avery followed Charlottes gaze to an enormous army of aliens and animals. some of the animals were from the zoo and others were pets and one of those pets were Marty!
 

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BSGlover123 writes:

but when they got to AAJH Mrs.Field says" What in the world is that?!"Avery said"It's an alien from outer space and we just wanted to see if one of the science teacher's can do some tests on him." when Avery said this the alien was struggling to get out. Avery and Charlotte tryed to hold on tight but he got free.and...
 

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cleaning2007 writes:

Then when she was just about to walk in the Junior high the allen stood up & said... " Wait. What if i'm not a real allen but i'm one of you'r friends". Meave paused." Well if you were someone that was one of my friends which friend would you be?" " Um." said the allen " How about if i were Charlotte?" " Charlotte?!" Yelled Meave " Why would you be Charlotte." So Meave came & tried to take off the allens mask but it would not budge. " How do get this thing off?" said Meave. "Because it's not a mask it's my face." Meave was speech less . "Got to go here comes my ride" said the allen see you later." OK!!!" said Meave "I sure wish that was my dream."
 

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sidnee#8 writes:

.... Maeve said "if it is the yurtmeister again I just waited my cup of hot chocolate!" Katani said "Who cares about you cup of hot chocolate Maeve I just finished sewing this shirt and it is silk that is such an expensive fabric! It took me mounts to save up for the fabric let alone sew it! Then Charlotte said "well there is only one way to find out if this is the yurtmeister!....
 

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princess_202 writes:

ran in the closet we could tell she was afraid. Charlotte went up and threw the hot choclate. the alien turned purpleand disappeared . avery came out and ran next to katani they went to isabels house after smilies/wink.gif
 

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Messy Monkey writes:

"Nah" said Charlotte "he wouldn't do somthing like this"
"this is just like a movie i saw last week," said Maeve "where this alien walks into a restaurant and everybody screams and runs away but that just makes the alien angry then he..." "woah Maeve i don't wanna hear the end," said Katani "oooh oooh i do keep going maeve," said Avery.suddenly the alien walked out the door and onto the street. the girls followed it out and saw the alien standing on the street with all the animals from the zoo and the whole neighborhoods pets standing behind it. and one of those pets was Marty!
 

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egirl226 writes:

isabel wals up and touches his face eww it is slimy. maeve says "this is like in spiceworld the girls bathroom broke and they had to go in the woods to go and on their way they bumped into space aliens and they asked for their autographs." "yeah i saw that in astralia then i fell of a banester" replied charolette. katani "meave who cares about some aliens you got cocoa all over my newest fashion and i worked so hard." avery " i think it is pretty cool that we get to meet aleins and there are always washing machines katani." isabel " averys right come on katani lets go get a clean shirt and take that on to the dry cleaners and i will pay we will be back in15 mins." after katani and isabel left the alien said where is the movie house i want to go? "my parents uh.. own um.. it." meave stampered will you all show me." okay lets just wait for isabel and katani. 15mins later kantani and isabel walked in on the way to the movie house the alien asked "anything i can zap up for you?" maeve said " a movi edirector" sure i need a dramatic red head . yow how" your hired"avery a pro soccer coach. r u avery maden yes lets go. charrolette " a publisher. " i need a book of stars." i love both stars and writing. lets talk. katanii want a carrere. sure pick up a news paper katani worlds best fashion desighner. isabel someone who needs bird cartoons." lets go to the musam. awsome my carttons. right then maeve walk up and at school the next mornigng and the alien walked in and asked what for breakfast?
 

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Nicis2cute4u writes:

Isabel walks over to the alien. "He looks pretty real to me." She exclaimed. "But i don't believe it. Even the best artist in the world couldn't make something THIS good." The girls stood staring at the creature for a while. Then the alien looked at Charlotte. Then without even thinking he jumped out at Charlotte. She screamed and right as the alien was about to jump on her Nick ran over and pushed Charlotte out of the way. The alien fell and spilled hot chocolate every where. He looked at the hot chocolate. He tasted some and a smile came upon his face. He grabbed a mug with some hot chocolate still in it and left. At that moment Charlotte woke up. "What a starnge dream" She declared.
Sorry i had 2 use u as an example but Nick just has 2 save U!!!!
 

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wizkid52 writes:

"I know, it looks so real," Isabel said."Well, maybe we should invite it to school." The rest of the BSG could see where she was going with it.
"You're right. our science teacher would LOVE to run some tests."
The alien sqeaked.
eee!And in a very robotic, and sloppy way, it said, "I-don't, um, enjoy,yes, uh, tests. I-usually, well, um FAIL! Yes, that's it. I fail-the-important-tests."
Charlotte stood up. "Well, too bad. This could be the article of the century and I'm not going to miss out on it." She and Avery took the alien by each arm and dragged it down Harvard Street, all the way to Abigail Adams, despite obvious struggles.
 

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muga123 writes:

screamed at Maeve "HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?" Maeve then said "Oh I am so sorry Avery I was just so surprised." Avery forgave her. Then they all stared at the alien. Isabel then said "I think I could draw him, maybe Avery could you push the alien into a chair?" Avery said "Sure." So she did and Isabel drew her picture.
 

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TwinOfKatani writes:

ran out the door. She grabbed her soccer ball and ran back to the bakery. She kicked her soccerball at the alien. Then, the BSG girls tied the alien up and took him to the tower, where they pushed him into the green swivel chair. Katani then gave him a makeover.
 

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pandagirl writes:

said "Have no fear, Avery's here!!!" She whipped out her skateboard and started playing her moves. "Take that, and that!!!!" When she started on him with her skateboard, she heard a guy's voice yelling "STOP!" The "alien" lifted his hands and took off his "head" Turned out it was Nick, trying out his Halloween coustume, and he was about to show Charlotte!!!!!
 

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skywriter21350 writes:

OH MY GOSH! THAT'S AWESOME!! can you play soccer?!?!
 

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smothie889 writes:

yelled wicked awsome an alein alrite
 

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skater1315 writes:

when she was facing the alien she looked at him really closely and then laughed. She laughed so hard she snapped everyone at the back into action. Then when the other girls were looking at her oddly she said, "You guys totally thought it was a real alien!! Say hello to ... Remember him from english class?"
 

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llamagirl6 writes:

"Have no fear, Avery is here!" Then, she crumpled the space alien into a ball and threw it back into space.
 

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spirit writes:

and gave her a mini skirt and a really cut shirt and said go put this on girl
 

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RaineDropG11 writes:

started to walk over to the aliens. " Avery, don't go near them!" shouted Charlotte. All of a sudden the aliens zapped Avery... Avery and the aliens were gone.

The rest of the girls ran outside and and started calling for Avery but she was nowhere i sight.

Then the girls ran to the tower to think of what to do. and unfortunently they couldn't think of any thing... all of a sudden Chartotte woke up all sweaty. It had all been a dream...
 

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movieactress writes:

started speaKING IN ALIEN!"dhdghsdkja" she whispered, and the alien hugged her and left. the next morning, the same alien arived at maeve's doorstep! " hhsgdja?" he asked.maeve was VERY confused." i'll b right back! promise!" that was maeve. she ran into her house and grabbed the phone,but when she tried to call avery, all she got was the message machine. "ugh!" maeve mumbled. when she raced back to the doorstep, the alien wasn't thier, but in his place was a letter. scince it was cold outside, she decided to read it inside and this is what it said: dear maeve, i can write in english, but sadley, i can not speak it.i have the dog marty.
omg! maeve shreiked butr she gotr it back the end
 

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BSGForever13 writes:

"OMG heyy, I'm Avery! Nice to meet you and your name is?"said Avery. "My name is Axes from the planet Flog," Axes annouced. "This is so cool. Maybe we should hang out some time."

^thats wat should go next!!!
 

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crazy4poniesalways writes:

UMMMMM....... guys? You are all writing what Avery does next. I'm sure that's not how it goes. One person says avery does or says something, and then the next person says how the others react or something like that. Not everyone saying what Avery does next. Cause we're going nowhere. It's just a bunch of things Avery is supposedly doing all at once. Ulina has the right idea, and a couple of others. She says what happened after Katani screams Avery spit on her. So someone should say what the others do or say after Katani. Not go back to the beginning. I'm pretty sure. Sorry for ragging on you guys. I'm just kinda confused about if that's what we're supposed to be doing.
 

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9825 writes:

stuck out her hand. hey, I'm Avery. Who are you? I'm Xena from the planet xx i will be eating your brains an licking your eye balls that are on a stick. ARE YOU KIDDING ME FREAK.I woudln't say that or that will make me mad oh sure replied Avery. O.k you ask for it and Xena went and .......
 

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tootsiepopbaby writes:

stuck out her hand. "Hey, I'm Avery. Who are you?" "I. AM. XZETOX. FROM. THE. PLANET. COX. I. WILL. SELF. DESTRUCT. IN. FIVE. FOUR. THREE..."
"Are you kidding!?" Avery yelled frantictly. "Let's get out of here!" The girls, and everyone else inside the bakery just before the explosion. "Yikes!" Charlotte said. "That was close!"
 

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4kicks321 writes:

shouted "Oh my gosh! It's a real live alien!".
Isabel screamed, Charlotte just stood there in amazement. The little green dude replied with a look of surprise and said "What is it that scare you humans? All I want is for this so called Maeve to teach me to dance. Rumor on my planet has it that she is the earth dancing queen!"
Maeve's eyes grew large than a big smile came over her face. "Well sure I'd love to, but could you do me a favor in return?" She said.
"Of course." Said the alien. Maeve got up and whispered in his ear. He pressed a button and a laser beam sucked up all the girls.
An hour later all the BSG came back into montoyas so happy from there trip around the stars. Charlotte loved it especially smilies/smiley.gif. They all had a great day and no one can EVER say that aliens can't dance... according to Maeve! smilies/grin.gif
 

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ulina writes:

and katani screams out eeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww!
you spitted on me!thats what should go next!
 

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HannahMontanaFannah writes:

yelled out the word "ALIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!". Everyone looked at each other. What was Avery doing?

Then, Avery walked over to the Alien and got her camera-phone from her pocket. She took a picture. "This one's for the Christmas cards!" she said. The flash of the camera scared the Alien so it went away.

Avery, had saved the day.
 

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bookworm101010 writes:

said "I'll get him!" Katani stood there staring at Maeve angrily. Charlotte and Isabel stood there screaming at the top of they're lungs. Just then Avery said "stand back!" Then she grabbed Charlotte's hot chocolate and sprayed it all over the alien! The alien made strange whirring noises and then melted into the ground slowly. All the BSGs were staring at the alien while Avery and Nick high-fived. "How did you know how to melt the alien?" Charlotte asked Avery. "It's in like every space book ever!" Avery said in a duh voice. Later that night Charlotte told her dad about the alien story and then she filed it away with all her other stories. 20 years later (the BSG were still friends) they were together cleaning out he attic and Avery said "hey you guys look!" Right there in the drawer they were cleaning was the story of Avery And The Alien.
 

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Kgirl fan writes:

Da alein ran away becas of Meva
 

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socoolsoccergal101 writes:

jumped on him! Isabel was so shocked she screamed "Avery"! But Avery kept pulling on the aliens head. Meanwhile the rest of the BSG were hiding by the table and screaming when Nick came out saying "Whats Going on Whats going on?". Charlottle turned bright red once she realized she was screaming the loudest. Katani explained as Nick ran and got a bat.He took a huge swing then stopped when the alien yelled "OK OK". They let go of the head and Avery went flying.Then slowly the rest of the BSG came out from under the table. Anna, Joline, and Yurt all stepped out of the suit and ran away. THe BSG and Nick laughed for what seemed like hours.
 

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charlotteramseyfan5000011 writes:

used her soccer skills to kick the alien in the shin so hard he started oozing green blood that soon covered the whole floor of the bakery.
 

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sadgate writes:

started talking to the space alien. A minute later the alien comes over to the BSG table and starts talking in this weird languege. It sounded VERY familiar...It was Nick!! Charlotte stood up and pulled off the alien's head mask. It was NIck under there! He then cried "April Fools!" smilies/grin.gif
 

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MyChEmIcAlRoMaNcE writes:

But then the alien came right back in and said "why did you do that?"
 

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BSG Fan writes:

did you see what i saw!!! said avery.. then she said that is so off the hook! and how can they come without us seeing there space ship???
 

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beatlefan writes:

Avery stood up and hastily ran over to the table he seated himself. "So, are you new around here?" she asked. Avery's face cracked into a smile. "Bleep, bloop cargrangle mop," the alien replied obviously unfazed by her humor. "Sorry dude, I don't speak bleep boop!" I'm on a role today, Avery thought to herself. "Oh, I forget sometimes that humans can't understand my language," the alien acted as though everything that was going on was as normal as waking up everyday. Avery, who had just plopped herself in a seat across from the alien, fell out of the stool. The BSG started to rush towards Avery, but they saw her sit up again and decided to watch and see what would happen next.
 

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BSGlover123 writes:

and said "AWSOME DUDE! A REAL LIVE ALIEN! or maybe it's a joke? yurtmister! yyour in big trouble!. wait! said Katani maybe it isn't the yurtmister may be it is a real live alien? let's not jusmp into conclusions here. said's Maeve. "LET'S RUN FOR OUR LIVES!"shout Isebal
So everyone ran out of MOntyana's except for Avery who was over excited and shook hands with the alien.After a few minute Katani stop running and ran back to montya's.Isabel ran after her and ask her where she was going.Katani told her she was going to see if Avery was ok. and Katani told Isebal to go back and tell Maeve and Char. that Katani is going to see if Avery was ok.When Katani got to Montoyna she saw Avery and the alien were talking. when KAtani saw this she ran toward Avery and told her to run away form this alien. but Avery told her no it's ok this alien is friendly,his name was Ruburt adn he waws just coming down here to getr some plant's because where they live they ran out of plant of a specific plant so they came down to Earth to get the plant and then go back to their planet. but when they got there they were trying to ask where they could get these plant but the people ran away and got scared but not Avery said the alien."This girl is an brave little girl."

A week later-

"WOW id you hear that I Am in the newspaper! YAHOO!!" shouted Avery."Now i am jelous! why am i not in the newspaper" said Maeve." Maeve it's just a newspaper. your going to be in the newspaper tons of time when your going to become a actress" said Katani."But..."Maeve stoped she knew that whenit becomes to Katani you don't argue with her.

 

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sunshinedancer writes:

HOLY PEANUT BUTTER CUPS WITH CHEESE ON TOP!!!


smilies/tongue.gif smilies/cheesy.gif
 

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skierGIRL writes:

" put her hands on her hips. The alien snarled. Avery said " Excuse me, do you need something?"
" Ave, sit down, who knows you may have angered it and we might be dead in like, a few seconds." Maeve whispered.
 

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gymnastchick84 writes:

...asked him what planet he was from. Charlotte said,"How do you even know if it speaks English?" It replied,"Every educatedMartian can speak English!" Turns out, Earth hot chocolate is sooo better then Mars hot chocolate, and the little space dude was just picking up a drink!
 

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cassida writes:

it is nick who just wants a date with char! smilies/wink.gif smilies/wink.gif
 

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mayflower writes:

started to clean the mess off Katani.But then the alien walked over to them and started to clean it off too!The BSG were so shocked espically Avery,but as she moved back she accidently knocked over Charlotte's hot chocolate that was on the counter so then Charlotte and Avery began to clean it off the counter but right at that moment Nick Montoya walked in and saw the mess on Katani and on the counter then at Katani and then at the counter and then Katani and then the counter, so he took a cloth and started to clean the mess off the counter.But for some reason he didn't seem to notice the alien and when he did he said Oh hey Al, your early and then he turned to the BSG and said girls meet Al he's from Neptune and he always comes to help when we need him. Then he turned to Al and said my sister needs some help washing the dishes come on, so then they both walked towards the door that said Employees Only leaving the BSG open mouthed. smilies/cheesy.gif smilies/cheesy.gif
 

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SassyChick166 writes:

to the window, they pushed him outside, and yelled, "See ya!"
 

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born2dance writes:

went right over and shook it's hand. "Yo, space-dude!" She said, as if this thing did NOT have 3 heads. "Bleep bloop. . . krupcake. . .!"
"Krupcake?" The Bsg said at once.
"You're KRUPCAKE'S alien?" Avery exlaimed, VERY loudly.
 

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horseluvr84 writes:

.... well, I don't believe that much that THIS is an alien. i think the yurtmeister is up to it again, or IS he?......
 

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sidnee#8 writes:

.... Said am I the only one seeing this? Or did I just have one too many cups of this Hot chcolate?
 

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avery4ever writes:

... and yelled cool! do you like the red sox?
 

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cari writes:

said what are all of these aliens doing here. smilies/shocked.gif
 

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spellbee12 writes:

...askd it if it did ani pro sports on its home planet.it said yes,& then demonstratd right in the middle of montoyas!everi1 except the bsg ran 4 their lives!
 

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katanigirl1996 writes:

But Avery stood up and said hallo to it. It started speaking in a strange language but then used a translator so we could understand.
 

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kgirl889 writes:

started to run in around the table, she ran so fast that the alien fainted and they dragged him over to..........
 

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